Revision: Purpose

after you read my paper ” how should we live” . then Take your purpose overall (think a one sentence message) and the purpose of each paragraph and write them on a new document. This should be a brief outline of your narrative (without the evidence/details and analysis). The outline should be coherent though and make sense reading it without the evidence and analysis. If it doesn’t, I’d like you to continue to revise these until the purpose/argument works clearly on its own and a reader can follow it just from this outline. Submit your original as well as your revised outline here. Then go back and change the sentences you need to in your paper so that the purpose is apparent in each paragraph and builds to the overall message!